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13th May 2013, 9:10 PM in The Side Dish From Beyond The Stars
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How it all started
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13th May 2013, 9:10 PM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
So this page introduces the hero of our story Matt. He's eating at WcDonalds, a place that seems to show up in every other anime. Next time maybe he'll go to Starducks, their a little more niche as I think only Melody of Oblivion had a Starducks in it. Though Tora Dora also had Sudobucks, maybe their in competition with Starducks? I like Starducks better because of ducks.

Comments:

11th Jul 2013, 9:04 PM
JustNoPoint
JustNoPoint
I left a bit of commentary about your narration boxes on your latest page. To extend upon that, in this page some are way too small and you should probably put a bit more space between the boarders of the boxes and the words inside. It was pretty tough to read this page.

I know you probably don't want to cover your art. But comics are a visual narrative and you need to keep in mind how the words are a part of the art as well and help with pacing and the flow.

Back to reading =D
11th Jul 2013, 9:34 PM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
I'm actually going to be redoing all the text in chapter 1 at some point, so that's something I'll keep in mind for when I do that.