Parasite Galaxy - A Long Walk Through the Gallery of a Dark Night
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Comic 24 - A Long Walk Through the Gallery of a Dark Night

11th Jul 2013, 5:58 PM in The Unfamiliar Familiar
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A Long Walk Through the Gallery of a Dark Night
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Author Notes:

11th Jul 2013, 5:58 PM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
Well Matt blew it, but he's not satisfied with leaving it at that. Nothing could possibly go wrong!

Comments:

11th Jul 2013, 9:00 PM
JustNoPoint
JustNoPoint
Really like what I see for this comic. My only suggestion so far is to get a font with slightly more personality and split sentences away from each other. Having that one long bar at the top hurts pacing and gives an impression of too TLDR

You could split them into boxes that would help guide the reader's eyes through the page better.

Now to go read your archive. :)
11th Jul 2013, 9:32 PM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
yeah I actually deliberately went for a pretty regular looking font for the human characters, because it helps set apart other nonhuman characters. Originally the human font was comic-sans, but everyone on the internet hates that font so I changed it. The thought of changing it again kind of makes me feel like going "uuuuwaaaahhh" but if people feel it detracts alot I could try something else. So to anyone out there think I should change the human font again?
11th Jul 2013, 9:55 PM
cattservant
cattservant
Red eyed manikin heads? Hmnnn...
11th Jul 2013, 10:05 PM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
Well technically those aren't maniquins, you'll find out what was in those dumpsters later in the story.
11th Jul 2013, 10:22 PM
ranger_brianna_new
ranger_brianna_new
Ah, foreshadowing. When someone says, "I had decided to find her even if I walked straight into hell looking for her", it's almost an assurance that they're going to go to hell (or some equivalent) in their future. :P
12th Jul 2013, 3:32 AM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
Ehehehe...we'll see where that goes...
13th Jul 2013, 10:58 PM
del c
del c
"There may be trouble ahead..." I sense the figures,reds and dark colours tones in the last few panels,mean some quality trouble down the road?
14th Jul 2013, 5:32 AM
Atsuuikakura
Atsuuikakura
Hehehe, we'll see...